Rewriting the Psalms

I love the book of Psalms.  It’s the first place I turn when I am sad, burdened and in need of comfort.  Sometimes I go to familiar verses, the ones I can count on time after time to express exactly how I am feeling.  Sometimes I am surprised by a new thought that never occured to me in a new verse I’d never noticed before.

In an effort to really understand the depth of these beautiful writings, I decided to rewrite the Psalms.  The Book of Psalms According to Dinah.  Phrase by phrase, I had to think about each word and how I would express the same thought.   For instance,  Psalm 30:1-5 says,

“I will exalt you, O Lord, for you lifted me out of the depths and did not let my enemies gloat over me.  O Lord my God, I called to you for help and you healed me.  O Lord, you brought me up from the grave; you spared me from going down into the pit.  Sing to the Lord,  you saints of his; praise his holy name.  For his anger lasts only a moment, but his favor lasts a lifetime; weeping may remain for a night, but rejoicing comes in the morning.”  NIV

Now the DPR version (Dinah’s Personal Rendition):  “Because You lifted me up out of the hole I was in and kept others from kicking me when I was down, I will now hold You up for all to see.  Here’s how it happened: I cried ‘help’ and You made it all better.  Honestly, Lord, it’s like being buried alive and having someone dig you up just in time.  This calls for some singing and praising, everybody!  God may show a flash of anger from time to time, but what rules the day is His loving acceptance.  I can cry a river at night, but as sure as the sunrise, things will look better in the morning.”

I hope David doesn’t mind me putting my own twist on his poems.  I’m not attempting to change them, just relate on a deeper level.  Just trying to get into the psalm writer’s head and get the ancient words into my heart.